Six Word Poem “For sale: Baby shoes, never worn.” – Hemingway

Six Word Poem,從海明威 “For sale: Baby shoes, never worn.” 的年代,直到 “Siri, delete Mom from my contacts.”;一樣傷感。精短簡要六字真言;short short story 變成了 flash fiction;陳腔濫調的東西不需要花巧修飾;簡單直接還更一刀見血。

“Wrong number,” says a familiar voice.

Finally spoke to her. Left Flowers.

Sorry soldier, shoes sold in pairs.

We’re lying in bed. She’s lying.

Two wives, one funeral, no tears.

I met my soulmate. She didn’t.

Stranger. Friends. Best friends. Lovers. Strangers.

如果換我來寫:
“Eat. Dream. Giveaway: Old Tight Jeans.”
“’I am not here.’ She said.”

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